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ultisage3

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To The Summer

The sanguine sun shimmered in the late Spring sky;
cool, sweetly scented wind blew from the north,
and trees shook from the birds and squirrels within the leaves.
Grass grew quickly under my feet, coloring the moist dirt green
and giving crickets, locusts, and grasshoppers a place to grow
as well as giving children everywhere chances for work and a need for chores.
There was always a pitter-pattering of little dogs' feet on the sidewalk
and the shrill laughter of children echoing away from big backyard trampolines
or from the little cove down the street where children gathered with their bicycles.
I remember busy Cub Scout meetings and Taekwondo and fencing,
and wresting with my dad before dinner
and spending countless nights playing Star Fox with my best friends.
However, Spring is ending and Summer has reared its head,
ending many of the actions I once held sacred,
tearing me from old friends, hardly spoken to now
and making it harder to focus on the old things,
now taken for granted.
I miss the Spring,
but maybe Summer will bring something new.  

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The Rose

Sweet scents swirled in the night
all for naught
no one could smell it;
The brilliant red, radiant petals
full and plump and beautiful
wasted without a single person wandering.
The thorns useless without a touch to take
or a trifling lover’s heart to prick.
The flower, as fantastic as it is,
will fade into nothingness
without anyone to remember it.
However, the rose and its attributes aren’t unsavable,
for all flowers can be found by adventure.

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Tell me what you think! I wanna know if you can give me ideas to write better! Thanks guys.^^

(If you wanna see how I've improved, here's two of my old poems: https://www.inertiar...s-my-specialty/


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Dobbie

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I like '' The Rose''  short and simple, and ive seen alot of people as the rose before,  and now those rose are now greatly appreciated. A master piece  :laugh:


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ultisage3

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I like '' The Rose''  short and simple, and ive seen alot of people as the rose before,  and now those rose are now greatly appreciated. A master piece  :laugh:

Thanks! That means a lot.^^


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Simmy

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nate writes poetry? *_* omgosh




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